Denisse R.G. (Park Slope After-School Tutoring) ----- 9
Cookies, I love cookies. When I was five years old, my first taste was at the bakery. I took a bite, and I went crazy because of all the sugar.
I had lots of energy and it was delicious. There are many types of cookies. For example, there are cookies with sprinkles, chocolate chip cookies, and Mexican cookies. Mexican cookies are cookies that Mexican people make when it is the Day of the Dead. They are made with sprinkles, flour, water, and much more sugar.
You can also make cookies at home. Christmas cookies are good because they are very yummy and they have frosting.
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