Dorian V. (Williamsburg After-School Tutoring) ----- 9
From the publication"The 826NYC Review #8"
If a washing machine was a portal, I would use it to go to the candy galaxy because I love candy. There would be slides that are made of candy, and you could eat the candy, but every time that you ate a candy in 3 seconds a new candy appears. And every time that it gets dark the candy will turn into beds. If you feel lonely the candy will turn into people and then you could play with your candy friends. You could have a candy party with your candy friends. And then you could slide down all of the slides. You could invite as many people as you want, because you could just say “Candy!” and a lot of candy will turn into people!
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